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Automatic composition comment education system

A comment and composition technology, applied in the field of automatic composition comment education system, can solve the problems of loss of enthusiasm for writing, vague comments, lack of examples, etc., and achieve the effect of enhancing initiative, improving learning interest and learning efficiency, and reducing burden

Inactive Publication Date: 2003-09-17
何万贯 +1
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[0008] 2. The lack of "encouraging" text is not conducive to mobilizing the enthusiasm of students to revise the article
Because it is full of derogatory language, it greatly stifles the enthusiasm of students for writing, so that they only know the disadvantages of their own writing, but do not see the good, thus losing their enthusiasm for writing, and they will have a headache when they mention writing in the future, and they will never dare to write again. Make bold attempts and innovations, so that it is difficult for students to improve their writing skills
[0010] 3. The comments are vague and lack clear guidance for students
[0011] In the process of correcting, many teachers often only read the composition once, point out some mistakes, and then write comments based on the general impression obtained from the reading. Such comments generally only point out the problems in a general way, lack of examples, and are not targeted. less than any guidance
[0012] 4. Only focus on "judgment" and point out mistakes, but lack reasonable suggestions for correction
[0021] 7. Only talk about the problems in the composition, without analyzing students' writing and thinking activities
[0024] To sum up, it can be seen that due to some problems in the process of correcting, the correcting is only a process of the teacher's due diligence, which is far from playing the role of composition teaching that the correcting should have, and the students cannot benefit from the correcting process. benefit from

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[0047] Help students revise their compositions and improve their language level through teachers' correction guidance, which is completely in line with the relevant principles of Chinese cognitive psychology. Human cognitive activity is a process in which people actively process external information. As far as composition is concerned, the so-called cognitive activity of students' writing is the process in which students actively process relevant information in their minds after analyzing and digesting the topics of the composition. In the writing process, students need to actively participate in order to make progress. Before writing a composition, students need to go through a series of cognitive activities before they can write. Through correction, the teacher can explain in detail the deficiencies of the students in terms of layout planning and thinking development, and point out the method of revision. After receiving the teacher's comments, the students can carry out i...

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An automatic comment education system for composition is composed of the composition analyzing and commenting module and the database module. The said data base module at least contains comment database, writing evaluation and correction database, writing value-adding database, student personl database, comment animation database, and education database. The said composition analyzing and commenting module can implement actual operations.

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technical field [0001] The invention relates to a composition comment education system, in particular to an automatic composition comment education system utilizing information technology. Background technique [0002] At present, Chinese teachers not only give lectures, but also correct compositions. The traditional composition correction is called fine correction. The so-called "refinement and fine-tuning" is actually not refined or detailed. Because it takes a lot of time to point out the advantages and disadvantages of each student's composition in terms of layout, theme, writing method, and use of words, and provide appropriate "revision" guidelines, and even make detailed revisions in the composition. strength and time. Therefore, in order to save time, most teachers only make general comments in the composition. It is a great burden for the teacher to make careful corrections. It takes about 15-20 minutes to write a 50-60-word comment for each composition. [00...

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Patent Type & Authority Applications(China)
IPC IPC(8): G06F17/30
Inventor 何万贯何嘉伦
Owner 何万贯
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